Monday, March 05, 2007

Palinode 17

To decide between the bees
Settling into supper
Still quiet
Picks a different cup

Bees scatter and sense—

        I start to undress the noise, but it follows

Still
sounds too loud

the winded population is
a stomachache
a pot-roast most people dress down

I didn’t want to pile up my clothes
the same,
I say,

anti-

anti-

anti


and I became a pumping steamship

        --green lakes flat as hard wood this would be quieter--

and I became a pocket purse and waited to get full

No buildup of brandished waves
No sloppy liquid lake splashing out of the sink

I can recant the messy afternoon—

Quiet the quieters hushing me

It’s not the humming bees that bother

I have forgiven them

When will the winded, the noisy, hush up its--

              -renowned
    -surround.

2 comments:

Nikki 3.0 said...

I really like that--the idea of you as a steamship, particularly, chugging anti-anti-anti. For some reason that image struck me as humorous. Also, there's mystery about the bees that is intriguing. Why would you choose between them? Horrid stinging creatures.

I'm going to ping it.

Nikki 3.0 said...

oh and



ping


you don't have trackback so I have to ping you by hand. That just sounds wrong.