Last night our walls walked away from us.
Believe it, it’s not
an academic thing it—
it just happened
I de-
signed it—
I think
I was
screaming
about the children—how many we have,
how they are problems.
Tuesday, January 16, 2007
Palinode 13
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Hailey,
I see a great abstraction away from the present situation to the basic condition of life in the first line--albeit one presented in a concrete, poetic manner. "I de-
signed it-": does this mean that the world of language evaporates? I like your fictional children, they are good projections of self, and problems as our projections can become.
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